Strassenkrieger

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[Andy_PunchlineKing]

ich bin selber noch nicht so gut ,um dir Ratschläge zu erteilen.ich kann merken,dass du dich schon mit Rappen beschäfttigt.
Ab und zu bist du undeutlich,die Stimme ist dann auch ohne Druck und am bischen zu schnell.
zB im Hook.
dass kannst du aber nur mit Efahrung und Practice.

Höre noch mal das Lied ,um korriegiere die Fehler.
wird dann ganz gut sein.
sonst können wir auch privat schreiben.

 

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[Chalaco]

klingt wie Patrick Bang

 

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[Chalaco]

klingt wie ne mischung aus brutos brutaloz haftbefehl und patrick bang!

 

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[Chalaco]

beat unnormal nice

 

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[Andy_PunchlineKing]

Cool!
auch Intro ist witzig!

 

[UndergroundMC]

hab was ändern müssen ,weil irgendan typ gestriked hat

 

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sorry falsches video...

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[PRiestX]

Der Text geht echt fit! Mit einer etwas besseren Produktion und vielleicht kleinen Korrekturen beim Timing / Takt, dann könnte das ganze echt noch geiler werden.

 

[UndergroundMC]

Haha danke dir PRriestX

 

[PRiestX]

Nicht dafür UndergroundMC ist nur meine ehrliche, bescheidene Meinung und war ehrlich