Some Bars 4 all you wannabe Gz

DirtySidaz

am Start
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15. Juli 2002
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You ain't have a clue who you're ****in with/
Don't ya know what this shit is?/
Tell me, ya wanna live on on your knees?/
Or just better die on your feets?/
I have 2 hit you ten times in your face till you make place for me/
Don't you know that it is true, that you can't be like me a G/
Go back to school, fool, we here don't play in your sand-pit/
if you run your mouth, there is bad breath like a cloud, so don't talk shit/
I bring the heat to the dance floor just like a flame thrower/
You see me as the Dragon, who's back again for saving his tower/
you'll feel like you're dead in hell and can't spell your own name/
just, bring all you got or nothing, but the result will be the same/
can't imagine that I make so much heat, than change your job and only read/
Bring your whole clique, and I make'em sick till my rhymes kicked them on the street/
If you're really reppin this shit you're talking than better think again/
I got bitches, when I stack them, they equal with the Big Ben/
You perhaps luv it to hate me, but better be down with the T to tha Craq/
When you can't stop your mama, how you wanna stop the Craq Attack?/
I think it's the wrong weed you smoke, cause you just signed your downfall/
I know it's Nonsence, but I wanna see what shit you can bring at all/
 
that you can't be like me a G/

ach nö... meinste wirklich, oda is das ironisch?

ehrlich gesagt, ihr könnt mich alle schlagen, aber von ein paar schönheitsfehlern abgesehen und das ich englische texte von deutschsprachigen meistens kaum mag, find ich den recht gut...
 
jo man sieht nen fortschritt und das ist es worauf es ankommt..

thrower reimt sich nicht mit tower da man da man das o in tower "a" spricht
 
Warum müssen sich Texte rhymen? Da kannst du gleich ein barockes Gedicht verfassen; Rap Texte sollen offen sein, ein Reim ist dabei kaum erwünscht; vor allem soll man die eigene Meinung einbauen!

Also ich finde den Text sehr gut; 1 luv!

Hier ein BSP: Das ist so grottenschlecht:

Don't mess wit me/
I will bring you lyrically on another level/
1 barrel, oh shit, the price will rise/
kamikaze soldiers won't be nice/
shaolin is what i am representin/
bitches **** wit me in their spare time/
drop a dumb ass rhyme/
wit no sense, y'all ain't feelin/
yea, me too, i hate it to flow like a cipher/
Ringz the last out of the Brooklyn Zoo/
1 luv my whiteboy, ya ain't feelin/
shit is ****ed up though/
don't want to be a silly hoe/
ayo, no
 
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