Hey, wollte hier einmal meinen 1 Part + Hook zum Track: I do flaws,yes
Würde gerne Kritik hören da ich wissen will wo ich mich verbessern muss usw.
AUDIOhttp://www.myspace.com/dtwyzesound
Part+Hook:
[intro]
I’ll run that Town
I’ll run the underground(underground)(yeah yeah yeah yeah)
It is different
I do flaws yeah
But I got my talent oohhh
[strophe]
Its like
They think Im joking, that Ima choking
Its like at 8 Mile not a Word I’ve spoken
My mouth wont go open,its like a heavy locked door
The way right now so cloven,cause I cant move the crowd on the floor
And so,doors closing,probably no more chances
But the coach take me cause he saw that I got handles
Im just a boy like you,dreaming of live the dream
And while I live and dream,people starting live my dream
(Damn)
The ice,the ladys,the cash,the whole celebrity
Would let ma adrenaline pump,like when you shoot LSD
Not like me, I spur myself once again and once again
Till Im glad with the result,and say I got it damn
I’ll run that land one handed, with the magic fingers
I twist you round ones fingers, like withchu doin it strippers
I accept mistakes,but aint more in this game
It is not twist, that people hate when Im having fame
[hook]
Its aint twist that, people aint like it when this boy still make it better
Its my wrist that, shining like the sun when they see it bling,its like a good weather
I do flaws yeah, and what? Im not perfect like all you haters too (ohh)
But I can balling, that’s what me differ and I’ll make it better than you
Würde gerne Kritik hören da ich wissen will wo ich mich verbessern muss usw.
AUDIOhttp://www.myspace.com/dtwyzesound
Part+Hook:
[intro]
I’ll run that Town
I’ll run the underground(underground)(yeah yeah yeah yeah)
It is different
I do flaws yeah
But I got my talent oohhh
[strophe]
Its like
They think Im joking, that Ima choking
Its like at 8 Mile not a Word I’ve spoken
My mouth wont go open,its like a heavy locked door
The way right now so cloven,cause I cant move the crowd on the floor
And so,doors closing,probably no more chances
But the coach take me cause he saw that I got handles
Im just a boy like you,dreaming of live the dream
And while I live and dream,people starting live my dream
(Damn)
The ice,the ladys,the cash,the whole celebrity
Would let ma adrenaline pump,like when you shoot LSD
Not like me, I spur myself once again and once again
Till Im glad with the result,and say I got it damn
I’ll run that land one handed, with the magic fingers
I twist you round ones fingers, like withchu doin it strippers
I accept mistakes,but aint more in this game
It is not twist, that people hate when Im having fame
[hook]
Its aint twist that, people aint like it when this boy still make it better
Its my wrist that, shining like the sun when they see it bling,its like a good weather
I do flaws yeah, and what? Im not perfect like all you haters too (ohh)
But I can balling, that’s what me differ and I’ll make it better than you